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A review by eefjes
That Time I Got Drunk and Saved a Demon by Kimberly Lemming
adventurous
funny
lighthearted
fast-paced
2.0
The premise of this story has a lot of fun potential! Unfortunately the writing is lacking for me.
Especially the beginning reads like a first draft by someone who doesn’t really know what makes writing connect with the reader.
I really wish the author to have gotten the chance to rewrite under guidance of a good editor, because I genuinely think there is a lot of potential for a fun and interesting fantasy romance in this setting and characters.
I did enjoy reading it, just wish it was better executed.
Especially the beginning reads like a first draft by someone who doesn’t really know what makes writing connect with the reader.
I really wish the author to have gotten the chance to rewrite under guidance of a good editor, because I genuinely think there is a lot of potential for a fun and interesting fantasy romance in this setting and characters.
I did enjoy reading it, just wish it was better executed.