A review by spryfrog
The Serpent's Coil by Elizabeth Silver

3.0

I enjoyed this overall, but it moved pretty quickly because of the length. I really came here to point out some hilarious typos. Please hire a copy editor.

(1) Main Character A spends time picking out the perfect name for his horse, Persephone. She's referred to as "Penelope" once lmao

(2) "later" instead of "lather" when shaving

(3) Main Character B's name is spelled wrong: "Marcuse" instead of "Marcus"

(4) "...sent a shiver down Will's pine..." I don't think Silver was actually referring to trees.