A review by witchivor
2043...(A Merman I Should Turn to Be) by Nisi Shawl

1.5

This story had an interesting concept but poor execution. There are a lot of terms that are introduced and used with no explanation, making it hard to follow what is actually happening in the story. I spent most of the story wondering what things were or meant, and characters were named but in some cases only once and never mentioned again. The last few scenes were almost completely unintelligible to me. 

There were good ideas here - the underwater settlements, land reparation under the sea, body modification and white supremacy, but it could have done with being more fleshed out.