A review by bluejay_45
The Girl by Lola St. Vil

2.0

The concept seemed really cool and different from anything I had read before, so I really wanted to like this book! Unfortunately the writing was just so unedited that it was difficult to pay attention to the story line. It read more like a rough draft than a final published work and was very disappointing. I think it could be a really great YA fantasy if it was edited heavily.