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A review by hollydawn
Meet Me in the Penalty Box by Cali Melle
1.0
I read this start to finish in one sitting and honestly it was a challenge. The repeated phrases, incorrect grammar and sentences that just don't make sense are a hard obstacle to overcome in all honesty. The characters are sweet and had potential but there is 0 depth or development at all.
I'm not a fan of past tense in contemporary romance and in this case it wasn't helped by the occasional slip in tense by the author. There were also occasionally spelling errors in characters' names.
I am a DIE HARD hockey romance fan, and I really really wanted to love this, but it really just felt like it needed an editor. (Or a new one, if it ever had one in the first place)
I'm not a fan of past tense in contemporary romance and in this case it wasn't helped by the occasional slip in tense by the author. There were also occasionally spelling errors in characters' names.
I am a DIE HARD hockey romance fan, and I really really wanted to love this, but it really just felt like it needed an editor. (Or a new one, if it ever had one in the first place)