A review by lucidreading
Dharmayoddha Kalki: Avatar Of Vishnu by Kevin Missal
Did not finish book.
I was so excited to read this. I've looked forward to reading this for a long long time, and I'm disappointed, also really annoyed.
That's it i'm stopping. I can't take anymore of the "tell us whats going on MAN"s and the bad storytelling. I keep editing everything as i read and i reallllyyyy dont wanna do that right now. I don't want to waste time on this anymore. I tried skipping and reading the center parts to see maybe it would hold my attention better, then I could give it a try but NO.
He really needs to make up his mind on if he wants his characters to have modern language or speak traditionally. In the pages i read I felt like he was going back and forth, and trying to info dump through his characters and not let it flow naturally.
Dnf@ i dont know, I dont care!
That's it i'm stopping. I can't take anymore of the "tell us whats going on MAN"s and the bad storytelling. I keep editing everything as i read and i reallllyyyy dont wanna do that right now. I don't want to waste time on this anymore. I tried skipping and reading the center parts to see maybe it would hold my attention better, then I could give it a try but NO.
He really needs to make up his mind on if he wants his characters to have modern language or speak traditionally. In the pages i read I felt like he was going back and forth, and trying to info dump through his characters and not let it flow naturally.
Dnf@ i dont know, I dont care!