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A review by yasisworld
Embraced by Nicholas Bella
2.0
I liked the idea of this world, with supernatural creatures being part of it and having taken over the world with humans either fighting against them or working with them.
That being said, I'm a big fan of formalities like proper grammar, spelling and tense use. I particularly dislike unneeded tense jumps and this novella has a lot of that. I know that different tenses need to be used to convey different times, but you still have to follow certain rules and this story doesn't do that. It has also a few noticeable spelling mistakes. All in all I won't be reading anymore stories in this series. But if you don't mind the tense jumps, go for it. The story idea itself is interesting enough!
That being said, I'm a big fan of formalities like proper grammar, spelling and tense use. I particularly dislike unneeded tense jumps and this novella has a lot of that. I know that different tenses need to be used to convey different times, but you still have to follow certain rules and this story doesn't do that. It has also a few noticeable spelling mistakes. All in all I won't be reading anymore stories in this series. But if you don't mind the tense jumps, go for it. The story idea itself is interesting enough!