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A review by skyreadssmut
Once You're Mine by Morgan Bridges
1.0
Just not good at all
For starters, one thing that pulls me out of the story is when authors reference things they’ve done no research on and have no knowledge of. She’s speaking about a firearm and uses the word nozzle instead of muzzle and talks about removing all the rounds from the chamber. The chamber of a handg*n holds one. Also, for a 1st person POV, you should not be using a thesaurus to write. Nobody thinks like that in their head. If it had been 3rd person, it wouldn’t be so jarring to see all of it, but that’s just not how people’s stream of consciousness works. The whole story is very rushed. MMC is a prosecuting attorney who commits violent crimes openly and unmasked? With zero consequences or anybody recognizing him as a prosecutor?? The main problems in the story are: the stalker and the killer. Neither issue is resolved for the FMC before the book ends. What in the wattpad is this book??? And how does it have so many good reviews?
For starters, one thing that pulls me out of the story is when authors reference things they’ve done no research on and have no knowledge of. She’s speaking about a firearm and uses the word nozzle instead of muzzle and talks about removing all the rounds from the chamber. The chamber of a handg*n holds one. Also, for a 1st person POV, you should not be using a thesaurus to write. Nobody thinks like that in their head. If it had been 3rd person, it wouldn’t be so jarring to see all of it, but that’s just not how people’s stream of consciousness works. The whole story is very rushed. MMC is a prosecuting attorney who commits violent crimes openly and unmasked? With zero consequences or anybody recognizing him as a prosecutor?? The main problems in the story are: the stalker and the killer. Neither issue is resolved for the FMC before the book ends. What in the wattpad is this book??? And how does it have so many good reviews?