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A review by kylieeason
Legally Yours by Nicole French
3.0
This book has the potential to hit 5 stars, but at last there's just too much sex and way too many errors. Yikes.
Here we have your typical billionaire man and student female. They meet, fall in love, fight, break up, get back together, yada yada, all the whole having sex like every other page.
There is some drama with Skylar's dad, and some other 'exciting bits' that if given more attention would have easily bumped this story up in my world.
If the author would cut about half the sex scenes out and expand on the issues and other dramatic bits it would allow the story to flow better and to be more engaging. I mean, we can only read the same sex scenes so many times before it's just over played, ya know?
There are so many errors in this book I questioned whether or not it was an ARC, but it is not. It is a book I "purchased" and that's a huge issue for me. (Side note, purchased is in quotation marks because it was free on Amazon!) I'm willing to over look these errors in ARCs because they will be edited again before publication, but I cannot overlook them when it's a purchased copy.
While I said I absolutely was not going to get the next book, the cliff hanger at the end has forced my hand. I'm 90% sure I know how Book 2 will play out, but hopefully I'm wrong, and will be pleasantly surprised.
Here we have your typical billionaire man and student female. They meet, fall in love, fight, break up, get back together, yada yada, all the whole having sex like every other page.
There is some drama with Skylar's dad, and some other 'exciting bits' that if given more attention would have easily bumped this story up in my world.
If the author would cut about half the sex scenes out and expand on the issues and other dramatic bits it would allow the story to flow better and to be more engaging. I mean, we can only read the same sex scenes so many times before it's just over played, ya know?
There are so many errors in this book I questioned whether or not it was an ARC, but it is not. It is a book I "purchased" and that's a huge issue for me. (Side note, purchased is in quotation marks because it was free on Amazon!) I'm willing to over look these errors in ARCs because they will be edited again before publication, but I cannot overlook them when it's a purchased copy.
While I said I absolutely was not going to get the next book, the cliff hanger at the end has forced my hand. I'm 90% sure I know how Book 2 will play out, but hopefully I'm wrong, and will be pleasantly surprised.