A review by larkspire
The Boy and the Dog Are Sleeping by Nasdijj
1.0
I went into this knowing it was a fabrication.
At first I thought that that and the absolutely needless and disgusting sexualisation of an 11-year-old boy were a shame, because I enjoyed the writing style in itself. But I quickly grew sick of that too, especially the rhymes at the end of each chapter. When the author (I forget his real name) uses them to try to make a profound point it only cheapens the effect. The very last chapter might be an exception to that - but he still spoils it with the pithy last paragraph.
I knew I shouldn't have bothered, and I don't know why I did.
At first I thought that that and the absolutely needless and disgusting sexualisation of an 11-year-old boy were a shame, because I enjoyed the writing style in itself. But I quickly grew sick of that too, especially the rhymes at the end of each chapter. When the author (I forget his real name) uses them to try to make a profound point it only cheapens the effect. The very last chapter might be an exception to that - but he still spoils it with the pithy last paragraph.
I knew I shouldn't have bothered, and I don't know why I did.