A review by rainelle_barrett
West End Earl by Bethany Bennett
4.0
There a number of things that I loved about this story. I will start by saying Phee and Cal were awesome. Their love story was very enchanting and heartwarming. There are a few things that was a little hard to get pass. I found the book could read more fluidly without the elegant/ flashy verbiage.
The book could be more of a page turner and read with an easy pace without the flamboyant wording. I notice that the book had a good length to it. I understand that the writer was trying to tie everything together in the end. But addressing each issue that was of no connection to Phee and Cal after realizing that they love one another could have been summed up in one chapter rather then five or six chapters. In the end the dragged out to the expected union of Phee and Cal.
I will also say that the writer did a great job of capturing my attention with the plot and drama of the story. The story was entertaining and very captivating. The story almost read like a movie.
The book could be more of a page turner and read with an easy pace without the flamboyant wording. I notice that the book had a good length to it. I understand that the writer was trying to tie everything together in the end. But addressing each issue that was of no connection to Phee and Cal after realizing that they love one another could have been summed up in one chapter rather then five or six chapters. In the end the dragged out to the expected union of Phee and Cal.
I will also say that the writer did a great job of capturing my attention with the plot and drama of the story. The story was entertaining and very captivating. The story almost read like a movie.