A review by rachelcabbit
Mr Darcy's Wedding by Jennifer Lang
2.0
I feel this story is just that bit too farfetched for my liking. The writing is clunky in places with overexplaining, repetitive phrasing and too much modern slang and a few Americanisms slipping in. It also suffers from what many P&P fanfics do - regurgitating chunks of the original.
I felt it was rushed and so their change of heart felt forced. I felt that their rehearsal would not have been legal without banns or a special license registered in their names and a marriage certificate signed by both so they would not have entered a marriage by accident. It was a point I would have forgiven if the rest had been executed better.
I felt it was rushed and so their change of heart felt forced. I felt that their rehearsal would not have been legal without banns or a special license registered in their names and a marriage certificate signed by both so they would not have entered a marriage by accident. It was a point I would have forgiven if the rest had been executed better.