A review by cjdawn236
The Lost Heir by Andi O'Connor

3.0

I loved the idea and the premise of this novel, and the author did some really interesting things - such as make her fantasy world a different planet, instead of parallel universe - that I really appreciated. But there were some flaws in the writing that I struggled with. The dialogue felt stiff and too formal, plus there were a lot of times when the explanations for things felt a little too stiff as well. I was being told too much instead of learning it through the writing. This book has a lot of potential, and I hope maybe the author improves with later works.