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A review by elizjmcfarland
Empires and Kings by A.C. Bextor
2.0
It was just mehhh...
Follows the relationship of Klara and Vlad. When Klara was 5, Vlad killed her traitorous father, and kept her in his house to raise. Fast forward 15 years, they start to see each other in a different way. Vlad and Klara both have enemies and those enemies emerge through the woodwork.
I like a little taboo in my stories, but this was awkward. I felt uncomfortable reading it, not the story itself, but by the way the author wrote it. It's like they were uncomfortable writing it. It had potential, but it needed to be re-worked a little in my opinion.
Follows the relationship of Klara and Vlad. When Klara was 5, Vlad killed her traitorous father, and kept her in his house to raise. Fast forward 15 years, they start to see each other in a different way. Vlad and Klara both have enemies and those enemies emerge through the woodwork.
I like a little taboo in my stories, but this was awkward. I felt uncomfortable reading it, not the story itself, but by the way the author wrote it. It's like they were uncomfortable writing it. It had potential, but it needed to be re-worked a little in my opinion.