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A review by longingforliteraturex
Kala by Colin Walsh
Did not finish book. Stopped at 4%.
I tried SO HARD with this book. There was so many lines I annotated that were so unnecessary though. SHOW me, don’t tell me. There’s also phrases that just felt like they could have been removed and it wouldn’t have impacted the story at all.
“I wonder if I should bother applying some make-up and decide I cannot be bothered. Though I am doing it, so I can be bothered”. WHY TELL ME THIS!? There were better ways to get this across to me than saying “lol i’m doing it anyway”.
“I wonder if I should bother applying some make-up and decide I cannot be bothered. Though I am doing it, so I can be bothered”. WHY TELL ME THIS!? There were better ways to get this across to me than saying “lol i’m doing it anyway”.