A review by ferrisscottr
Memory's Blade by Spencer Ellsworth
1.0
I always hate giving bad reviews to books because this was created by an artist who put his creation out there to the world.
But
I think this was a poorly written book which needed a really good editor.
I stuck with this whole trilogy because it was such a great concept and it was just poorly executed.
I think this is a writer who will be great some day but doesn't quite have the experience yet to make a good book.
The plot was non-existent.
The characters were paper thin.
There was no character development or meaningful interaction.
I felt no connection to anyone in the story.
When people died I felt nothing.
Good concept with poor execution. Mr. Ellsworth needs at least to write another 1,000,000 words to gain experience and then I'm sure he will be publishing great things but this was a disappointment for me.
But
I think this was a poorly written book which needed a really good editor.
I stuck with this whole trilogy because it was such a great concept and it was just poorly executed.
I think this is a writer who will be great some day but doesn't quite have the experience yet to make a good book.
The plot was non-existent.
The characters were paper thin.
There was no character development or meaningful interaction.
I felt no connection to anyone in the story.
When people died I felt nothing.
Good concept with poor execution. Mr. Ellsworth needs at least to write another 1,000,000 words to gain experience and then I'm sure he will be publishing great things but this was a disappointment for me.