A review by shighley
The Red Pencil by Andrea Davis Pinkney

3.0

Very moving story that can easily make you realize how uninformed you are. I was glad to see the explanatory information at the end; I wonder how much background students should be given before the book is read.

There are many wonderful phrases, and the poetic form does not seem compromised. I loved the description of Amira as "okra-toed", and the lovely pictures and descriptions beginning on page 250. Some things I would ask students after they've read this: What must Amira's mother feel like when she finally discovers she has a gift for drawing? (Can you imagine going through like without having a chance to realize you have a talent?) What must conditions be like to be very happy to receive a stick as a birthday present? What part does superstition play in Amira's life? What are the advantages/disadvantages of relying on superstition?

At first I found the drawings to be somewhat simple, but in reading the book, I came to appreciate what they represent. I would also encourage students to do further research on Darfur, and figure out something they might do to assist the people who have had to flee their native land.