A review by ggbookrecclub
All or Nothing by Lo Everett

emotional lighthearted medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

2.5

I keep giving this series a chance hoping for the best.

⭐️ Rating: 2.5/5
🌶️ Spice: 3/5

⚾️ Friends to Lovers
⚾️ He Falls First
⚾️ Previous Trauma for both 
⚾️ Baseball Romance

Much like the first book in this series, All or Nothing is riddled with errors. I’m not convinced there was any editing because certainly someone would notice when the FMC’s name changed for a chapter. 

This book also felt like it was written before book 1. It certainly had more thought behind it and dug a lot deeper but it's like this was the story the author wanted to tell but didn’t want to lead the series with All or Nothing. So weird. It also jumps through different timelines and for a large part it’s handled well and is easy to follow. But other parts feel lazy and sloppy and I’m not sure what was happening. 

I’m really struggling to continue with this series. I’m really interested in the 4th book, but I'm not sure it’s worth going through this two more times to get there.