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A review by grahamdowns
In the Beginning by Charmain Marie Mitchell
dark
sad
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
2.0
This had the makings of a decent enough story, but bad writing let it down.
I struggle to stay immersed when I see things like missing apostrophes, incorrectly used phrases (“must of” instead of “must have”, for example), commas everywhere except where they should be... things like that.
I know those things don’t bother some people, but they bother me. It’s a real shame.
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I struggle to stay immersed when I see things like missing apostrophes, incorrectly used phrases (“must of” instead of “must have”, for example), commas everywhere except where they should be... things like that.
I know those things don’t bother some people, but they bother me. It’s a real shame.
Click here to find out where you can get your hands on a copy: https://books2read.com/u/medwLg
* Note: That's an affiliate link, so if you click through to a store and end up buying anything, I might earn a commission from your purchase.