A review by bookcrazylady45
The City Who Fought by S.M. Stirling, Anne McCaffrey

3.0

Pretty good. None of the collaboration books are as good as those written by Anne alone but some are better than others. This one had one major flaw for me...a huge story chunk is missing. You cannot just skip an episode and then later comment on its happening. Okay, you can but it must be better than this. I went back and reread two chapters looking to see if I missed something because a sick bad guy mentioned meeting and assaulting two main characters and then two chapters later the two main characters are shown as one injured and mentioning same 'kiss' and the other behaving as if nothing had happened to her at all and when I went back a second time...there did not seem to be any space in all the action for anything to have happened to the two 12 year olds. Big continuity error which bothered me. Liked the Epilogue.