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A review by aubreyfrogger
Bishop by A.E. Via
2.0
DNF @ 60%. I listened to the audiobook.
This needs a lot of editing. There are too many sentences like “he kissed his lips” where it’s hard to tell which “he” is being referred to - usually both in the same sentence in awkward ways. There are ways around this that make it much less confusing. This was seriously a major problem that needed to be fixed.
I noticed two instances where “Bishop” was mentioned when I was pretty sure they meant “Edison”. Unsure if this was the narration or the book itself.
Story was okay but nothing special. I do like the contrast between Edison and Bishop but nothing else made it worth my while.
This needs a lot of editing. There are too many sentences like “he kissed his lips” where it’s hard to tell which “he” is being referred to - usually both in the same sentence in awkward ways. There are ways around this that make it much less confusing. This was seriously a major problem that needed to be fixed.
I noticed two instances where “Bishop” was mentioned when I was pretty sure they meant “Edison”. Unsure if this was the narration or the book itself.
Story was okay but nothing special. I do like the contrast between Edison and Bishop but nothing else made it worth my while.