A review by shaikhanabeel
Heartbreaker by Melody Grace

1.0

Positives:-

-The writing style wasn't terrible.

-The "wam bamming" nicely done.


Negatives:-

-The reactions of the characters are not believable.

-Pacing is bad.

-Heroine very weak-willed, indecisive, and quick to forgive. She flips back and forth between being pissed and uncontrollably horny.

-Hero's justification for leaving is bullshit.

-Idiot best friend gives idiotic advice.

-Plot points left hanging or only brought up once then forgotten.

-Basically, story too short to make me give a shit about any of the characters.