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A review by dream_write_read
Perfection by Merphy Napier
3.0
I liked it. Very Westworld feel.
I loved the plot of the story. There was just issues with character building and pacing for me. This could have had a higher rating from me if there weren't these issues for me. For example, I felt the romance just kind of appeared out of nowhere there was no build up, no little moments other than the clumsiness of our main character (before the relationship started). But, that wasn't the only relationship the appeared without effort. Same with pacing I felt that this book could have left off sooner to allow more of that world building/character building. There were plenty of opportunities to leave off on a semi-cliffhanger to start the next book with.
Overall though I still enjoyed the story.
I loved the plot of the story. There was just issues with character building and pacing for me. This could have had a higher rating from me if there weren't these issues for me. For example, I felt the romance just kind of appeared out of nowhere there was no build up, no little moments other than the clumsiness of our main character (before the relationship started). But, that wasn't the only relationship the appeared without effort. Same with pacing I felt that this book could have left off sooner to allow more of that world building/character building. There were plenty of opportunities to leave off on a semi-cliffhanger to start the next book with.
Overall though I still enjoyed the story.