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A review by sparklingreader
Covert Exposure by Valerie J. Clarizio
3.0
Thoughts: Note: this book was first published in 2012 under the title “Cookies for Santa”. This is a contemporary romantic suspense, however, the relationship between Spinelli and Shannon is more lust-based than romantic. The two of them hate each other on sight and the animosity continues throughout with Shannon angry almost all the time. Spinelli is too – but his anger is interspersed with lust. An no, not romance. Just lust. Though there are spots where he admires her care for others, mostly we’re treated to his thoughts on her long legs, especially in short dresses, her shape, her green eyes, etc. There’s no real character development on Shannon’s part. Spinelli does grow a little and we are given some of his backstory, but nothing on Shannon. The times when they go to a home to determine foster care are realistic and well-written. And absolutely hilarious when Spinelli is playing Santa – especially the part where the kid pees on him! As far as the mystery goes, there is absolutely no doubt who the bad guys is from the outset. Yes, Shannon may be a target, but so could any of the other elves, and even Spinelli. The story itself isn’t awful. And there’s definitely conflict between Spinelli and Shannon. But the book needs some serious editing by someone who understands the rules for capitalization, tense mixups, POV hops, and more.
Recommendations: If you don’t mind editorial issues, hot lust, and are just looking for an interesting story to kill a couple hours, pick this up.
Disclaimer: Disclosure of Material: I received a final and/or advanced reader copy of this book with the hope that I will leave my unbiased opinion. I was not required to leave a review, positive or otherwise, and my opinions are just that… My Opinions. I am posting this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255: “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising”
Recommendations: If you don’t mind editorial issues, hot lust, and are just looking for an interesting story to kill a couple hours, pick this up.
Disclaimer: Disclosure of Material: I received a final and/or advanced reader copy of this book with the hope that I will leave my unbiased opinion. I was not required to leave a review, positive or otherwise, and my opinions are just that… My Opinions. I am posting this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255: “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising”