A review by madisonleb
Broke Down Single Mom by Kai Lesy
2.0
I will say this: the spice was good. Great even. I loved little Miley and Annie, though i wish we would’ve seen more of them interacting with the men.
The story itself was alright, but there were various holes within the timeline. One chapter would start with “A few days passed since *this incident*” and then the next POV begins with “The next morning after *same incident*.” It just didn’t always line up, and I am a reader who picks up on that. I also feel like there was build up to the twins’ parents being a bigger issue than they were. They were mentioned multiple times but we only saw them once and it was minor.
Overall, not a story I would read again, but it wasn’t bad, just not the best.
The story itself was alright, but there were various holes within the timeline. One chapter would start with “A few days passed since *this incident*” and then the next POV begins with “The next morning after *same incident*.” It just didn’t always line up, and I am a reader who picks up on that. I also feel like there was build up to the twins’ parents being a bigger issue than they were. They were mentioned multiple times but we only saw them once and it was minor.
Overall, not a story I would read again, but it wasn’t bad, just not the best.