A review by lumbermouth
On the Meldon Plain by Pam Brondos

2.0

OH this book is a wreck, so poorly written that frequently you can't follow the action and I realized two thirds of the way through I didn't actually know what the point of the quest we were on was, but JOKE'S ON ME, the story is just interesting and compelling enough that yes, reader, I bought the stupid thing for kindle, because it just came out and my library said they weren't going to get it. Seriously though don't write an action scene if you can't keep track of what your characters are doing. Like, oh, this is intense, I think, because everyone is rushing and saying they're scared, but I can't...actually...tell what's happing? OH WELL moving on. You don't know why they're going over there or what the significance of that cave is? Don't worry about it! We'll probably never come back to that point again. Interesting parallel universe idea, but barely any likable characters this time and what even was going on half the time.