A review by wonniepooh
Impending Doom by Kya Aliana

1.0

i received this book for free through goodreads first reads

I have to say right up front, I could not finish this book. it was so bad. the dialogue was stiff, stilted and unrealistic. people just don't talk like that. and the editing was ridiculous. multiple uses of the word "anyways" using wrong words like wondering instead of wandering, shown instead of shone. I feel like I could have found an error on almost every page. the story may have been ok but I couldn't tell because I couldn't get past the awful writing