A review by its_erin
Forget Me Not by Karissa Kinword

challenging slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

0.5

Just do yourself a favor and read 'You Were There Too.' Its the exact same story, just not in space and with better writing.

CHARACTERS: The characters were one-dimensional and unlikable. And in a confusing fashion, they're unknowable at the same time. You are given very little information, and therefore I struggled to care about anyone beyond Logan, and that was out of pity for the character. 

WORLDBUILDING: the world-building was barely there for what had been marketed as a science fiction book.  There are allusions to spacecraft  and settlements, other planets, but nothing is fleshed out and is therefore wholly uninteresting. 

Characters move to a spacecraft, to a room, to a bathroom, to a room.  Candidly, it is obvious that the "world building" is really just a shallow overlay clumsily placed upon something that previously existed in other media. 

SMUT: It is in here, and there's a lot of it, but it honestly got to the point that it was actually repetitive and uninteresting. 

MISC: The author makes the decision to write in first-person omniscient. It was not enjoyable nor did it add anything to the story.

HEA?:
no, the author attempts to be clever with an 'it was all a dream' ending. If you make it to the end, you might wish you hadn't.

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