A review by crystaldg7
The Octunnumi Fosbit Files Prologue by Trevor Alan Foris

2.0

I believe the author had so many great ideas for a fantasy/sci-fi world that he jumbled them all together in just this prologue. It would have been great to slowly introduce the reader to his world and characters. Instead reading this can cause whiplash at how fast the scenes change. I would have loved to see more character exploration then what we got. I would have loved to spend more time in one place. This book reads like a run-on sentence. It uses apostrophes instead of quotation marks. It also changes from third person to second person and back again without any warning. Then let me mention the dialogue between characters, more often then not one character interrupts the other. Characters interrupting each other got so so annoying while reading. I appreciate the references to environmental conservation and animal rights that the author throws in there though. I do think this could have been a better book with an editor.