A review by zakfar_magni
Training Jonas Weatherly: a domestic femdom novella by W. Arthur

4.0

Many stories start really well and then lose the momentum somewhere in the middle and bring forth a pathetic ending. This book has an entirely different issue. It includes a prologue that (maybe intentionally) delivered an entirely wrong idea about rest of the story. While the story is on the subject of an FLR involving a responsible and loving but a very strict dominant woman, the prologue gave the impression as if it's a non-consensual Femdom story of a man's subjugation by manipulation. But I won't say this idea is is bad. It's execution has gone wrong. Because right after the prologue, the initial chapters started building the man's character as a submissive and showing us his tendency towards accepting a dominant female for his partner. As these chapters felt conflicting with the prologue, we start getting confused whether we misunderstood the character during the prologue, or that's happening during those later chapters. But later on, this becomes a really good and exciting story. The dynamics between the two characters is really good. And the story flow is close to perfect. In my eyes this could be a pure masterpiece of FLR / Femdom involving Domestic Discipline if the initial chapters were handled properly. I just wish someday W. Arthur decide to revise the book and bring harmony in earlier chapters, or completely omit the prologue. But even in its current form this is a great read, and the best book of W. Arthur I've read on the subject. I will highly recommend this to everyone interested in this genre.