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A review by jiixbooks
Yours Truly by Abby Jimenez
2.0
This got very dull very fast after the promising first part of the novel.
I did not enjoy the constant comparisons between the mmc and the fmcs brother in her pov. There is a way of writing this without the fmc making it sound like she wants to mother the mmc like a surogate big sister 😠which i fear this book danced too close to.
It is also just too long for its own good. Another round of edits to sharpen the story and cut out the access, that made the pacing flop wouldve been perfect.
ALSO SPOILERS:
accidental pregnancy 💀💀💀 that was so unnecessary and just ehhh considering the amount of communication problems the leads randomly had all of a sudden after establishing their good communication in the beginning
I did not enjoy the constant comparisons between the mmc and the fmcs brother in her pov. There is a way of writing this without the fmc making it sound like she wants to mother the mmc like a surogate big sister 😠which i fear this book danced too close to.
It is also just too long for its own good. Another round of edits to sharpen the story and cut out the access, that made the pacing flop wouldve been perfect.
ALSO SPOILERS:
accidental pregnancy 💀💀💀 that was so unnecessary and just ehhh considering the amount of communication problems the leads randomly had all of a sudden after establishing their good communication in the beginning