A review by lmuania
What Lies Beyond the Veil by Harper L. Woods

adventurous medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

2.0

No tension in my view. Storyline meh. No surprises at all. 

But also: Caelum did not respect her boundaries. He was not better than
Jensen. (e.g. when he touched her butt and she was trying to get away but he woke up and roled on to her. Or when they were bathing the first time and he saw her scars. Or When she didn't wanted the people to see her pussy but he told her to show him "his funking cunt". Like literally all the time)
. We as the readers (more or less) knew that she was fine with what he did, but he couldn't know that because he never asked her. What i am trying to critisize is
he said so often, that he wouldn't do anything without her permission but that is just not what he did. She said at some point that it is a fact that he respected her boumdaries.
and it really pisses me off that they are all thinking that way. It is objectively not true. 
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