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A review by labri
Breathe into Me by Amanda Stone
1.0
Terrible. Absolutely terrible.
The plot of this book is so overused and incredibly predictable.
A broken girl flees to a university far away from her hometown to escape the damaged life her father caused. A sexy, smooth-talking "bad boy" meets her and they hit it off immediately. But wait! She won't have sex with him, and makes it clear that she won't despite him not even mentioning it at all.
Their relationship takes the typical course of casual flirting to working to get past the deep-seeded issues the girl has.
Someone tell me that I'm not the only one who knew the end of this story before it began.
It wasn't just the plot being predictable either, it's always the broken girl who has the extroverted and flirty best friend who obviously attracts the best friend of the bad boy.
I don't see how authors can reuse the same plot; it's time to be different! Write something completely new and fresh; it's easier said than done, I'm aware but take that chance! Be creative and extraordinary. And please, write anything but this.
There are far too many stories that don't keep you on your toes, stories that have more than enough in common with every other book out there.
The plot of this book is so overused and incredibly predictable.
A broken girl flees to a university far away from her hometown to escape the damaged life her father caused. A sexy, smooth-talking "bad boy" meets her and they hit it off immediately. But wait! She won't have sex with him, and makes it clear that she won't despite him not even mentioning it at all.
Their relationship takes the typical course of casual flirting to working to get past the deep-seeded issues the girl has.
Someone tell me that I'm not the only one who knew the end of this story before it began.
It wasn't just the plot being predictable either, it's always the broken girl who has the extroverted and flirty best friend who obviously attracts the best friend of the bad boy.
I don't see how authors can reuse the same plot; it's time to be different! Write something completely new and fresh; it's easier said than done, I'm aware but take that chance! Be creative and extraordinary. And please, write anything but this.
There are far too many stories that don't keep you on your toes, stories that have more than enough in common with every other book out there.