A review by shawnthebeachy
The Watchers by A.M. Shine

2.0

I think there’s a good story here. I just wish someone else had written it.

Everything is so padded that you can pretty much skip every other paragraph and miss nothing. The narrator is inconsistent. Incorrect grammar crops up. The random, improper uses of passive voice are jarring. Oh, and if I have to read, “the yellow one” one more time…