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A review by kelbee
Crossing the Touchline by Jay Hogan
4.0
4 Stars
This one worked a lot better for me. The author did more with the pacing, and kept it from getting too repetitive. Still a little over long I’d say, but it worked out. Cam and Rube were adorable together, and I loved the fem/jock dynamic. Cameron was so toppy. Very sexy. I also really enjoyed the addition of Reuben’s nephew Cory. He was on the spectrum and adorable as hell. What I did not enjoy so much was Reuben’s father - what a disgusting ass. His constant vitriol was hard to read. I wanted Rueben to stand up for himself and Cam and it took him quite a while to do so. It seemed very authentic to how a real life situation would be though so I understood. Cam and Rueben also came off a little immature at times, but their general adorableness kept me invested and interested til the end so I’m glad I went on to read this one.
“And you, Cameron Wano, are one hundred percent gorgeous and one hundred percent mine, and I am such a lucky fucking bastard to even get a piece of you let alone to love you.”
“He no sooner laid his hands on me than every fibre of my body opened to him, and miles of walls crumbled. Walls I didn’t even know I had”
This one worked a lot better for me. The author did more with the pacing, and kept it from getting too repetitive. Still a little over long I’d say, but it worked out. Cam and Rube were adorable together, and I loved the fem/jock dynamic. Cameron was so toppy. Very sexy. I also really enjoyed the addition of Reuben’s nephew Cory. He was on the spectrum and adorable as hell. What I did not enjoy so much was Reuben’s father - what a disgusting ass. His constant vitriol was hard to read. I wanted Rueben to stand up for himself and Cam and it took him quite a while to do so. It seemed very authentic to how a real life situation would be though so I understood. Cam and Rueben also came off a little immature at times, but their general adorableness kept me invested and interested til the end so I’m glad I went on to read this one.
“And you, Cameron Wano, are one hundred percent gorgeous and one hundred percent mine, and I am such a lucky fucking bastard to even get a piece of you let alone to love you.”
“He no sooner laid his hands on me than every fibre of my body opened to him, and miles of walls crumbled. Walls I didn’t even know I had”