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A review by malinajade
Her Revenge by Jade Presley
3.0
I’m so disappointed with the ending. The same thing happened with the first book. I feel like the writer rushes the ‘big fight’. This story had so much potential. I personally think it would have been better for Cari’s character if her Dad killed some of her mates before he died.
I think that when they were fighting in the fire realm, before Blaize came to the rescue, Steel should have died. Everything was going downhill, Cari had a perfect view of him but couldn’t get to him. I think that would have given her more drive to kill her dad.
I think it should have been Steel because Cari seems the closest to him.
Also her Dad is supposed to be a very powerful man, yet he doesn’t ever put up much of a fight?
The writer has put in wayyyyy too many spicy chapters. It got too much. I’m the end I did end up skipping the spicy bits. I was more interested in the story line. Having too much spice made me lose interest
I think that when they were fighting in the fire realm, before Blaize came to the rescue, Steel should have died. Everything was going downhill, Cari had a perfect view of him but couldn’t get to him. I think that would have given her more drive to kill her dad.
I think it should have been Steel because Cari seems the closest to him.
Also her Dad is supposed to be a very powerful man, yet he doesn’t ever put up much of a fight?
The writer has put in wayyyyy too many spicy chapters. It got too much. I’m the end I did end up skipping the spicy bits. I was more interested in the story line. Having too much spice made me lose interest