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A review by earthtonadia
11 Scenes by Octavia Jensen
2.0
2.5 stars
We were warned that this was all smut, no plot. I usually wouldn’t have minded but this was so far from the first novella. There was no tension. Bri felt so dull, like a mindless doll that fell into a Dom/sub dynamic overnight and lost all of her spark. Harrison was better, he didn’t change much. Even though some of the dialogue felt so cringy. It had lots of kinks that I liked but there was no real emotion behind it, in my opinion.
We were warned that this was all smut, no plot. I usually wouldn’t have minded but this was so far from the first novella. There was no tension. Bri felt so dull, like a mindless doll that fell into a Dom/sub dynamic overnight and lost all of her spark. Harrison was better, he didn’t change much. Even though some of the dialogue felt so cringy. It had lots of kinks that I liked but there was no real emotion behind it, in my opinion.