A review by troilynne
The Fabric of Our Souls by K.M. Moronova

dark fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

0.75

The writing was incredibly repetitive and made the conversations between the FMC and MMC seem very juvenile. Not just that, but the descriptions were very basic, I think the FMC’s “pale pink hair” was mentioned once every chapter, please trust that the reader can remember she had pink hair.

The ending was incredibly cliche yet unrealistic at the same time. I mean really.
we are beat over the head with the fact that the FMC has a heart condition and then she gets shot directly in the chest at close range but survives because another character gets shot, is instantly paralyzed, lands on top of her and slows the bleeding? Give me a break.
 
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