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A review by jennygogo101
The Marriage by K.L. Slater
3.0
*SPOILERS*
This was alright. I enjoyed the first half and did want to see how it would end. I’ll just write my unorganized thoughts:
Ended so suddenly
The neighbor/teacher was randomly was blackmailing Robert? Okay. Far-fetched and not even a good surprise.
So there was no hidden agenda with the marriage? Wtf
Unrealistic reactions and dialogue. Robert confessing immediately to killing coral, Ellis barely crying for coral
Long explanations of things by all characters (so many info-dumps)
Why the POV of Ellis? Was it to be a red herring? Why POV of the officers?
Jill and Bridget are friends again suddenly and Jill is totally happy with the marriage now?
The “twists” were not exciting, especially the last one. It was just meh.
Not very thrilling.
This was alright. I enjoyed the first half and did want to see how it would end. I’ll just write my unorganized thoughts:
Ended so suddenly
The neighbor/teacher was randomly was blackmailing Robert? Okay. Far-fetched and not even a good surprise.
So there was no hidden agenda with the marriage? Wtf
Unrealistic reactions and dialogue. Robert confessing immediately to killing coral, Ellis barely crying for coral
Long explanations of things by all characters (so many info-dumps)
Why the POV of Ellis? Was it to be a red herring? Why POV of the officers?
Jill and Bridget are friends again suddenly and Jill is totally happy with the marriage now?
The “twists” were not exciting, especially the last one. It was just meh.
Not very thrilling.