A review by hugo19999
His Dad Will Do by Anna Kensing
2.0
I appreciate that it has almost little to no angts at all just the way I like it but
Funny thing is this story doesn't work because of that, because there is no wrongness between them.
When I read the blurb I expect that forbidden storyline to set in from this story but
Surprisingly this just felt tame
They already felt like a couple from the very beginning just reconciling.
I just want how it feels wrong because I've read a similar storyline like this before on how it works so well because the forbidden part of it and how they shouldn't do that but they do it anyway but in this everything was so immediate and also the characters didn't help they were so two dimensional.
The timeline confuses me that it caught me off guard one moments we're two days into the story but then in the next couple of line we're already a week in it.
Maybe it's just my sour mood idk.
Funny thing is this story doesn't work because of that, because there is no wrongness between them.
When I read the blurb I expect that forbidden storyline to set in from this story but
Surprisingly this just felt tame
They already felt like a couple from the very beginning just reconciling.
I just want how it feels wrong because I've read a similar storyline like this before on how it works so well because the forbidden part of it and how they shouldn't do that but they do it anyway but in this everything was so immediate and also the characters didn't help they were so two dimensional.
The timeline confuses me that it caught me off guard one moments we're two days into the story but then in the next couple of line we're already a week in it.
Maybe it's just my sour mood idk.