A review by melonmachinery
Jo Jo Makoons: The Used-to-Be Best Friend by Dawn Quigley
lighthearted
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
2.0
There was a noticable typo with who was getting the shots at the end of the rhyming chapter. Cute story, and love what it's trying to achieve.
Not a fan of the nickname Up-Chuck, there's a lot of mean nicknames and jokes in my family that they pass off for culture but the older I get the more I disagree with, and seeing it here I understand the goodheartedness it comes from but still don't agree with or want to encourage.
I sincerely hope they continue publishing JoJo stories though, it's good to have her in the world!
Not a fan of the nickname Up-Chuck, there's a lot of mean nicknames and jokes in my family that they pass off for culture but the older I get the more I disagree with, and seeing it here I understand the goodheartedness it comes from but still don't agree with or want to encourage.
I sincerely hope they continue publishing JoJo stories though, it's good to have her in the world!