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A review by seriouslybookish
Outmatched by Kristen Callihan, Samantha Young
1.0
DNF 60%
The writing, dialogue and the characters themselves ... I’ll pass.
Why you ask?
1. Our main lead locks his brother in a room so he can’t go on a date. Umm.. am I the only one concerned?
2. They used words like anyhoo Ladies and gentlemen this is from two respectable authors.
3. She doesn’t like to swear so instead uses words like Prinkles (for prick) and bullhock (for bullshit). She also refers to fuck as ‘f-word’. Need I remind you she is 30 years old? Also she has a problem with other people swearing. Why?
4. She’s all about green and judges people if they don’t save the environment.
5. She’s also a modern feminist. i think ‘is it because I’m a feminist?’ is how she gets out of arguments.
6. But mainly because of this: “She didn’t have large breasts. They were little cupcakes. Goddamn, but I wanted a bite.” Cupcakes? Really? He could have just said he found it enticing but instead he refers to them as cupcakes.
The writing, dialogue and the characters themselves ... I’ll pass.
Why you ask?
1. Our main lead locks his brother in a room so he can’t go on a date. Umm.. am I the only one concerned?
2. They used words like anyhoo Ladies and gentlemen this is from two respectable authors.
3. She doesn’t like to swear so instead uses words like Prinkles (for prick) and bullhock (for bullshit). She also refers to fuck as ‘f-word’. Need I remind you she is 30 years old? Also she has a problem with other people swearing. Why?
4. She’s all about green and judges people if they don’t save the environment.
5. She’s also a modern feminist. i think ‘is it because I’m a feminist?’ is how she gets out of arguments.
6. But mainly because of this: “She didn’t have large breasts. They were little cupcakes. Goddamn, but I wanted a bite.” Cupcakes? Really? He could have just said he found it enticing but instead he refers to them as cupcakes.