A review by book_nerd_mo
Cherry Popper by River Laurent

3.0

This story needs an editor (or a better one). People don’t change emotions the way these do. In the same scene Mia goes through a rainbow of feelings. It’s just not believable. Also, some inconsistencies are unforgivable. Like at the end when Jesse gets home and Elliot yells “daddy!” But then when they decide to try for another baby Mia is happy they waited until Elliot was lifting his head. A lot of timing stuff just wasn’t working out, like when she went back to the city and made all these changes, it seemed like months had passed when it turned out only 10 days had.