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A review by nicolecook30
Catalyst by Nicole Fanning
2.0
The story itself was really nice. But I just wish the writing "style" was better. and I say style loosely here. I'm not sure what it's called when you force emphasis with "!?" and all caps, but it really took you out of the story. It would have been so much better if it was just written normally and made way more of an impact. It felt like a cheat.
The story itself is proof of the authors talent, but that was only negated by poor dialog writing.
The story itself is proof of the authors talent, but that was only negated by poor dialog writing.