A review by chelyely
From Ashes To Flames by A.M. Hargrove
1.0
Flat
I really wanted to like this, it started interesting but the writing is flat, repetitive, over descriptive of non consequential things that don't bring anything to plot or character development, so the relationship and the end felt rushed and out of place and lacking chemistry.
One thing that bothered me was the constant "you need to work out" Comments from him as a boss. There's just too many little things that add up with this story than makes it hard to actually enjoy.
I really wanted to like this, it started interesting but the writing is flat, repetitive, over descriptive of non consequential things that don't bring anything to plot or character development, so the relationship and the end felt rushed and out of place and lacking chemistry.
One thing that bothered me was the constant "you need to work out" Comments from him as a boss. There's just too many little things that add up with this story than makes it hard to actually enjoy.