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A review by moon_raccoon
Rule of Three by Lore Graham
4.0
For a PwP (the Point Was Porn) story, this worked for me. There was enough world and character building to get me motivated about the characters but holding back enough that I don't feel robbed of development by the long porn scenes.
MC is a impulsive lawful good who wants to prove "his badassery" to his hot rival by doing black magic. Hot rival clearly has strong feelings for MC which ze cloaks with barbs and sass. MC semi-accidentally summons an incubus, who finds their competitive flirting sexy. It ends in a Happy For Now bondage threesome.
I felt there was too much exposition at the beginning and not enough sex dynamics discussions (my tastes run for "show don't tell" for plot, not for sex). On the other hand I liked the characters being clear about desiring each other by the end. The sex scenes were nicely explicit, the incubus character both interesting and a clever porn shortcut, the writing smooth.
This is what it said on the tin and I was pleased.
MC is a impulsive lawful good who wants to prove "his badassery" to his hot rival by doing black magic. Hot rival clearly has strong feelings for MC which ze cloaks with barbs and sass. MC semi-accidentally summons an incubus, who finds their competitive flirting sexy. It ends in a Happy For Now bondage threesome.
I felt there was too much exposition at the beginning and not enough sex dynamics discussions (my tastes run for "show don't tell" for plot, not for sex). On the other hand I liked the characters being clear about desiring each other by the end. The sex scenes were nicely explicit, the incubus character both interesting and a clever porn shortcut, the writing smooth.
This is what it said on the tin and I was pleased.