A review by athiker10
The Flames of Albiyon by Jean Menzies

adventurous lighthearted medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

3.0

I liked the premise of the book and the characters and tropes used, but it felt like there needed to be another draft and some outside editing because everything felt a little clunky and underdeveloped. 

Looking forward to seeing future writing and hoping it’ll steadily improve. 
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