A review by lucrezi
The Eternity Cure by Julie Kagawa
2.0
I understand that there has to be some angst here, but it goes overboard, as in there are too many sentences and paragraphs saying the same thing over and over. For example, you get Allison thinking something to herself in italics and in the next paragraph she reiterates it.
Whatever happened to subtlety and quality over quantity, seriously. No need to spell everything out to us
I also understand the need for some exposition, but it goes on for way too long. Give us a sentence or two. Don't give us a whole run through of whatever happened in the first book in more than one paragraph! My eyes just glaze over whenever this happens.
At this point I'm just reading so I know what happens in the end. Aghhhhh
(I'm so tired of first person narratives)
Whatever happened to subtlety and quality over quantity, seriously. No need to spell everything out to us
I also understand the need for some exposition, but it goes on for way too long. Give us a sentence or two. Don't give us a whole run through of whatever happened in the first book in more than one paragraph! My eyes just glaze over whenever this happens.
At this point I'm just reading so I know what happens in the end. Aghhhhh
(I'm so tired of first person narratives)