A review by kelbell182
Exposing ELE by Rebecca Gober, Courtney Nuckels

1.0

I really wanted to like this book. I was disappointed by the first in the series, but decided to give it another shot with the second book. I was presently surprised by the second book and so I went into this book with tentative, but high, hopes.

I was let down again. The writing returned to the stiff and awkward form that was displayed in book 1. I really don’t have a lot to say about this book, except to say that I will not be continuing the series. It takes a lot for me to not want to complete a series.

While there are a few aspects of the story that leave curious about how they will be resolved, it is not enough for me to put up with such a poor reading experience. Sorry Rebecca Gober, but my best suggestion would be to have a few people read your books and give you feedback before you publish. The story has “good bones” but the extra bit that makes the words on a page into a story is lacking.