A review by gabichatslit
naughty request: can I make you cum? by Kay Shanee

2.0

Plot started off promising and the spice was fairly decent but the MMC reads like a Tyler perry hero and was kinda overbearing and hard to root for. The fmc constantly going back and forth with her own feelings got redundant after awhile and the addition of the 3rd act breakup didn’t help either. Also the secondary relationship in the story was a mess and the emphasis placed on Jem being unsure of transition her role in Cayson’s life just for there to be no scenes of them interacting following the shift was kind of unnecessary